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Sonnet: My Flower Girl by Hardedge-Maelstrom Sonnet: My Flower Girl by Hardedge-Maelstrom
lol, i'm pretty sure you VII fans can figure this out :P
ok so i wrote a sonnet for that same poetry assignment -_-,
couldn't think of anything...saw my Devotion drawing and the words came to me...
not easily mind you xD i couldn't get some parts to rhyme properly ^^;
i guess you could call this a "fansonnet", much like a fanfiction except its a sonnet xD lol, yea go figure :P
by the way, if you read this, play Aerith's theme ;)

My Flower Girl
Upon this field of scented yellow flowers,
We finally meet but only back to back.
For two years I've searched Gaia over,
To find you and the forgiveness that I lack.

Two years ago, in a time of despair,
You reached my heart making me laugh and smile.
But I couldn't protect you then and there,
I welled up screaming with hatred and bile.

Two years down the road we meet once more,
I still possess that lamenting face,
Wanting to say its you I that adore,
In hopes you won't vanish as I turn to embrace.

You said you were going away but would return when it was over.
Even to the end, you smiled, my beautiful flower.
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FunnyDreamerMushi Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2010
ohhh.. with Aerith's Theme [Final Fantasy[prefer piano version...] sonnet was really wonderful...
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Hardedge-Maelstrom Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Aw thanks! I'm glad you think so :)
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CaliforniaBabeWV Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2009
Very beautiful. C:
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cleris4ever Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So beautiful
:heart: the sonnet

:+favlove:
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Hardedge-Maelstrom Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Thanks
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cleris4ever Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome
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HinoNeko Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello! Just stopping by to let you know that this picture has been included in the [FINAL FANTASY] issue of Hidden Gems of Fan Art!
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Hardedge-Maelstrom Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2008  Student Digital Artist
Wow, thanks for the feature! I really appreciate it :)
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miracleangel Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW I really love this one!!

Its very different from your previous works!

I like how the background is done, and the colors used as well as Cloud and Aeris!!! SUCH KAWAII-NESS!!!

Loving it!
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Missa-EXE Featured By Owner May 21, 2006
I LOVE this! o___o I'm very particular over AerisXCloud, so this made my day. ^^
The sonnet's so beautiful. I wish I could write poetry as well as you!

(I always have really lame rhymes, that makes me think of that song where the singer says that horrible line "well tweedly dee, well tweedly dum, look out baby 'cause here I come" XD)
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Sternchen08 Featured By Owner May 21, 2006
oh my god...what a beautiful poem!
i love cloud and aeris......think im gonna make a picture
and dedicate it to your wonderfull lines :)
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Hardedge-Maelstrom Featured By Owner May 21, 2006  Student Digital Artist
haha thank you! lol, that's so flattering xD
looking forward to seeing your picture =)
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Sternchen08 Featured By Owner May 21, 2006
allright :D
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Samurai-Masami Featured By Owner May 20, 2006  Professional Digital Artist
Awww ;w; that's so sweet....

*weeps*

;w;
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Hardedge-Maelstrom Featured By Owner May 21, 2006  Student Digital Artist
oh no i made you cry T-T
*pats* :hug:
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Amani-Ishikawa Featured By Owner May 20, 2006
Hey that is a well written sonnet! Sonnets are kind of hard to write b/c of the meter and the rhyming. I am more of a free verse poet, so to me it is difficult. I suck at rhymes. :lol: Still nice poem, and great pic too. ^^
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Hardedge-Maelstrom Featured By Owner May 21, 2006  Student Digital Artist
thank you! that means a lot seeing as i don't usually write poems and when i do...they suck xD
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MafiasGrl Featured By Owner May 20, 2006
Aww Colin, you're such a romantic :D heheh awesome job on the picture and poetry :)
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Hardedge-Maelstrom Featured By Owner May 21, 2006  Student Digital Artist
ahaha xD that's the first time someone described me as a romantic ^^;
lol, thanks Krissy :hug:
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MafiasGrl Featured By Owner May 21, 2006
hahah there's a first time for everything =P :hug:
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Quor18 Featured By Owner May 20, 2006
Very nice. I say that both in regards to the poem and the picture. I don't know what you did to make the picture, but i really like the look and feel of it. What medium is it?
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Hardedge-Maelstrom Featured By Owner May 20, 2006  Student Digital Artist
oh it's watercolour with a bit of brightness/contrast adjustments in photoshop :P and thanks ^_^
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